Trifextra Week Fifty One: choose one of the pictures below and give us a 33-word response to it.far above the roil and boil
hue and cry
in quiet repose
imagine the world an ordered place
of sootless air
and whispered breeze
and uncluttered horizons
with room to spread one's wings
this is the picture I chose
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I enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.
DeleteAh! The freedom of the air. Very well expressed!
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DeleteEnjoyed this, good take on the photo prompt.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I appreciate the read and I'm glad you enjoyed.
DeleteWise bird.
ReplyDeleteWiser than we give them credit for.
Deletelove the flow of this. nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I often worry about the cadence.
DeleteYou expressed the serenity in that pigeon's demeanor well.
ReplyDeleteThanks, that's what I was trying to imagine. I'm glad it worked.
DeleteA beautiful bird's eye view. Very pretty.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much.
DeleteIf only we all had the room to spread our wings and take to flight. Lovely. Simply lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you, yes, I wish for room to fly as well.
DeleteWow. That's fantastic.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I'm glad you like it. I was trying to just be as relaxed as that pigeon looked.
Delete"of sootless air and whispered breeze"
ReplyDeletelove.
Thank you, Cam. Sometimes that's all I want. A whispered breeze.
DeleteLovely. It might take a big imagination, but in quiet repose anything is possible.
ReplyDeleteRoom to spread one's wings. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteLove the sounds in this (always my favorite part of poetry) and, of course, the sentiment. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThat would be a better world. Uncluttered horizons are what I'd most like to experience.
ReplyDeleteIt would be easy to imagine such a world if I only had wings! Great entry this week.
ReplyDeleteMy first thought, when I saw this photo was, where were the places of Nature for this bird to go to? You captured my thoughts on that topic with much eloquence and grace. Thanks. Well done.
ReplyDeletea place to spread ones wings.Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteAn overwhelming visualization of the world through the eyes of an all-knowing pigeon. I loved it!
ReplyDeleteWell done, nice writing.
ReplyDeletereminds me of psalm 55:6.
ReplyDeleteloved it!
Yours envisions calmness, not messy bird droppings. LOL! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful! I wish there was more to it, but then it's perfect as it is too.
ReplyDeleteWhat a quiet, restful poem!
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful! Well done.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent flow, I really like this
ReplyDeleteThe world looks and feels so much better through the eye of a pigeon. Something we all would love to have. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteYes,"in quiet repose-uncluttered horizons" & most important ,"room to spread our wings"-an Utopian dream it seems-one which we all want to be true!loved this:-)
ReplyDeleteThis is really good. You somehow managed to make 33 word lyrical, beautiful and purposeful. Not easy.
ReplyDeleteI like.
ReplyDeleteLook at you, taking the high road with this prompt. Unlike the poop-spattered one so many of us jumped upon.
ReplyDeleteLovely.