Saturday, February 2, 2013

PVE??


Trifextra: Week Fifty-three
For the weekend prompt we're asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.



"Shh!  Did you hear that?"

"Hear what?"

"Sounds like someone whispering."

"You're nuts."

"Screw you! Listen!"
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"So what're they saying?"

"It sounds like..."are there any spirits that wish to speak with us?""

Posted by Renee at 10:40 AM
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32 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 2, 2013 at 10:50 AM

    Heh, cute!

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  2. lumdog2012February 2, 2013 at 11:39 AM

    I'd say to get out quick! Nice one.

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    1. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:16 PM

      Oh, but which side? The ghost hunters or the hunted ghosts?

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  3. UnknownFebruary 2, 2013 at 1:38 PM

    I always wonder what "the other side" has to say when I watch these ghost programs. We can only imagine, and you imagine quite well.

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    1. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:17 PM

      I watch far too many of those. I'm surprised I haven't heard "bumps" in the night.

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2013 at 2:14 PM

    :) Very nice.
    memyselfandela.

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  5. AtreyeeFebruary 2, 2013 at 2:17 PM

    This is a cool idea-a seance!Oh,were I to be in such a situation,I would be so torn between wanting to know & the fear of unknown!Great job:-)

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    1. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:18 PM

      I know! And you never know if you've invited something unwanted.

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  6. Dawn :)February 2, 2013 at 2:24 PM

    Lol, very cool :) Love this take on the prompt.

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  7. Transferred MemoriesFebruary 2, 2013 at 4:45 PM

    Love it. As usual, you put in your own surprise twist which we have come to know and love.

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  8. BoFebruary 2, 2013 at 5:30 PM

    Love this!

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2013 at 5:46 PM

    Ooh, I like this from the spirits' point of view!

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    1. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:20 PM

      Thank you, I just thought we should get their take on it. ;-)

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  10. UnknownFebruary 2, 2013 at 7:31 PM

    Ohh, great from the other side!

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    1. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:21 PM

      Yep, always try to see from the other POV! Thank you for stopping by.

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  11. TMWHickmanFebruary 2, 2013 at 10:30 PM

    Oooh! Hopefully the humans will listen!

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    1. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:21 PM

      Or the tape recorders...

      Thanks for reading!

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2013 at 11:47 PM

    Whoooeeeuuuu! Very clever and spooky. Ilike it.

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    1. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:22 PM

      Thank you! Spookier for the spooks this time.

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  13. DraugFebruary 3, 2013 at 8:42 AM

    ha! You managed a cool twist in 33 words of dialogue-only. I'm envious (:

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    1. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:23 PM

      Thank you! And? You have no reason to be envious.

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  14. barbaraFebruary 3, 2013 at 5:04 PM

    aha - ears from the OTHER side listening to the voices on THIS side. :)

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    1. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:23 PM

      Heehee, I had to do it. Thanks for reading, I appreciate it!

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  15. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:57 PM

    Ha - too funny! Wonderful take on the prompt!

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  16. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2013 at 11:58 PM

    Nice! What a great flip! Excellent use of 33 words.

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  17. Silversound7February 4, 2013 at 1:34 AM

    Nice twist! Just great

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