Saturday, February 2, 2013

PVE??


Trifextra: Week Fifty-three
For the weekend prompt we're asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.



"Shh!  Did you hear that?"

"Hear what?"

"Sounds like someone whispering."

"You're nuts."

"Screw you! Listen!"
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"So what're they saying?"

"It sounds like..."are there any spirits that wish to speak with us?""

32 comments:

  1. I'd say to get out quick! Nice one.

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    1. Oh, but which side? The ghost hunters or the hunted ghosts?

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  2. I always wonder what "the other side" has to say when I watch these ghost programs. We can only imagine, and you imagine quite well.

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    1. I watch far too many of those. I'm surprised I haven't heard "bumps" in the night.

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  3. :) Very nice.
    memyselfandela.

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  4. This is a cool idea-a seance!Oh,were I to be in such a situation,I would be so torn between wanting to know & the fear of unknown!Great job:-)

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    1. I know! And you never know if you've invited something unwanted.

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  5. Lol, very cool :) Love this take on the prompt.

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  6. Love it. As usual, you put in your own surprise twist which we have come to know and love.

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    1. Thanks, Dani! And yes, twisted, that's me.

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  7. Ooh, I like this from the spirits' point of view!

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    1. Thank you, I just thought we should get their take on it. ;-)

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    1. Yep, always try to see from the other POV! Thank you for stopping by.

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  9. Oooh! Hopefully the humans will listen!

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    1. Or the tape recorders...

      Thanks for reading!

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  10. Whoooeeeuuuu! Very clever and spooky. Ilike it.

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    1. Thank you! Spookier for the spooks this time.

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  11. ha! You managed a cool twist in 33 words of dialogue-only. I'm envious (:

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    1. Thank you! And? You have no reason to be envious.

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  12. aha - ears from the OTHER side listening to the voices on THIS side. :)

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    1. Heehee, I had to do it. Thanks for reading, I appreciate it!

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  13. Ha - too funny! Wonderful take on the prompt!

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  14. Nice! What a great flip! Excellent use of 33 words.

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