This week’s assignment will require the fewest number of words ever: we want you to write a story – your choice of topic – as a tweet.Soft pastels, muted further by early morning fog, silhouette sleepy pines with the promise of light.
The loneliest night is finally over.
Nicely done. Evocative and dare I say? Poetic?
ReplyDeleteDefinitely some poetry coming through. It floats softly through as you speak the words, like a gentle wind.
ReplyDeleteLovely
It is poetic. There was promise and ghosts.
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
Oh! That was beautiful! I love it!!
ReplyDeleteBetween the post and the background of the site I don't know whether to have a comforting cup of tea or kill myself. Either way, many emotions elicited and nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThat makes me feel the coolness of the mist, the shadow's beauty. I adore how you crafted these words.
ReplyDeletebeautiful! I love when nature can echo our emotions like this.
ReplyDeleteHaunting poetry- love!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous and poetic. The hopeful promise of dawn holds so much.
ReplyDeletenothing worse than having the longest night also be the loneliest. Those with good company are always preferred.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful... I love the imagery here.
ReplyDeleteAgreed...the imagery of the foggy morning as pastel is quite lovely. I am glad the lonely night has ended.
ReplyDeleteThis was really lovely, renee!
ReplyDeletePainted a picture with words. I can look out my window and see the scene surely as if I were there.
ReplyDeleteWow. You used just the right words - not too much, just enough to allow me to paint the picture in my mind. Lovely!!
ReplyDeleteLovely description. I can recall mornings like that.
ReplyDeletePeaceful, pretty, but yet sad and questionable. Makes you hope things are going to work out right.
ReplyDeleteOh, thank goodness! Lonely nights are always hard!
ReplyDeleteI feel as though i want to step outside and take a deep breathe and sit on my back porch a while. Refreshing.
ReplyDeleteThat was a poem, a painting, and the opening scene in a movie all at once!
ReplyDeleteI love mornings like that, but I cant stand long, lonely nights.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done!
That indeed, was poetic. Such rich imagery! Nice! :>
ReplyDeleteVery nice imagery. It made me feel refreshed after a long night, and full of hope.
ReplyDeleteSo soft and gentle. Beautiful imagery, I saw it all.
ReplyDeleteGreat job, "twitfic" is definitely one of the more challenging forms of prose :-)
ReplyDeleteOooh, lovely! You're the only one I read that did it like a poem.
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