Nicely done. Evocative and dare I say? Poetic?
Definitely some poetry coming through. It floats softly through as you speak the words, like a gentle wind.Lovely
It is poetic. There was promise and ghosts.Great job!
Oh! That was beautiful! I love it!!
Between the post and the background of the site I don't know whether to have a comforting cup of tea or kill myself. Either way, many emotions elicited and nicely done!
That makes me feel the coolness of the mist, the shadow's beauty. I adore how you crafted these words.
beautiful! I love when nature can echo our emotions like this.
Haunting poetry- love!
Gorgeous and poetic. The hopeful promise of dawn holds so much.
nothing worse than having the longest night also be the loneliest. Those with good company are always preferred.
This is beautiful... I love the imagery here.
Agreed...the imagery of the foggy morning as pastel is quite lovely. I am glad the lonely night has ended.
This was really lovely, renee!
Painted a picture with words. I can look out my window and see the scene surely as if I were there.
Wow. You used just the right words - not too much, just enough to allow me to paint the picture in my mind. Lovely!!
Lovely description. I can recall mornings like that.
Peaceful, pretty, but yet sad and questionable. Makes you hope things are going to work out right.
Oh, thank goodness! Lonely nights are always hard!
I feel as though i want to step outside and take a deep breathe and sit on my back porch a while. Refreshing.
That was a poem, a painting, and the opening scene in a movie all at once!
I love mornings like that, but I cant stand long, lonely nights.Beautifully done!
That indeed, was poetic. Such rich imagery! Nice! :>
Very nice imagery. It made me feel refreshed after a long night, and full of hope.
So soft and gentle. Beautiful imagery, I saw it all.
Great job, "twitfic" is definitely one of the more challenging forms of prose :-)
Oooh, lovely! You're the only one I read that did it like a poem.