Linking again with Master Class Monday at Our Write Side with a bit of bizarre art.
Buddy supposed he ought to clean out the cellar. He'd left it it go far too long. It was part of the job he wasn’t going enjoy. The rest of the work was so fascinating. Watching the process happen kept him rapt with wonder and fair amount of pride.
The steps he followed with such meticulous care, from choosing the perfect specimen to knowing when to end the project. Over thinking and the subsequent tweaking had been the source of much disappointment early in his career.
Now he knew when to leave it alone and let nature finish the job. That was so evident in his latest work. Buddy stood in front of his masterpiece basking in the pleasure that results from a job well done.
He wanted desperately to share this one, it was that damned good.
Before he could set up the display he would absolutely have to dispose of the others. They would be too shoddy next to his latest.
He sucked a deep breath of resolve and grabbed his cleaning supplies along with a large stack of trash bags then bounded down the steps.
When Buddy flicked the light on its glow shone on the tangled pile stored in the corner. He released a sad sigh at the sight. How could he ever have thought them beautiful.
He reached the first of the pile. He'd had hope for this one. Her petite frame and sassy red hair had survived the drying process well, but as time went on her skin had continued to shrink. The result was protruding joints, particularly knees and elbows. As she shrunk, her body hair proved to be difficult to maintain.
He shook his head, over thinking had been his downfall. As he toiled through the pile he giggled. His works resembled a mound of gnarled monkeys. Knobby joints on withered limbs covered in coarse hair.
He had finally realized the obvious, remove the hair right after death. And the most important part, make sure to let them drink all the water they wanted before killing them. Keep that hide plumped and then dry them out slowly. That kept the natural shrinkage to a minimum.
Yes by golly, the round figured blond upstairs was the perfect specimen. The rest? Well, they'd just have to go.
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Tuesday, January 5, 2016
Masterpiece
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Thursday, September 17, 2015
Writers Block
Just a bit of flotsam floating in my head today.
They've been quiet today.
Why today?
So chatty the past few months. Telling me their stories. Making sure I understood everything.
They gave specific instructions so I could write each chapter exactly as they lived them.
Today though, today they have said nothing.
I keep thinking back, did I miss some important detail? Did I did I not strike the right mood?
Are they mad? I feel like are ignoring me they on purpose.
Yeah, they used to get pissed off when I joined my friends for lunch, or drinks on the weekend. But, that hasn't happened for a long time now. My friends don't call anymore.
I mean, it's not like they can just grab their phones and have a chat.
I do kinda miss those spontaneous dates.
But they said it interfered too much with telling the stories. I had to get rid of those friends.
And truth be told, I don't miss them all that much.
Most of the time.
Except for Ginny. Her I miss.
It's particularly hard to get rid of Ginny.
The others, not so much.
Becky was so wrapped up in her kids, she was making me crazy with all the pictures and bragging. Oh my God, the bragging! You'd have thought her kids were geniuses.
Your kids aren't so special now are they, Becky?
And Robbie, constantly off on some adventure where he was the best looking, smartest, funniest...blah blah blah. Of course, all the women just fell all over him, too.
Your last adventure wasn't quite what you expected, was it Robbie?
So, they don't call anymore
But, that was alright. They were still here to talk to me.
I do wish they would have accepted Ginny.
Maybe that's why I'm being ignored. They are mad because I'm still holding on to Ginny.
I bet that's it. As soon as I let go of her, I'll be on the good list again.
I'm just not ready yet. Maybe I can appease them by spiffing up their stories. After all, they want people to read them, right?
Who shall I start with?
Regina. She'll want everyone to understand. She never, ever really meant to hurt her kids. She just wanted to give them baths.
Becky's kids needed baths, too. It made Regina sad how dirty they were. Just like her kids. She could never keep them clean enough. She showed me how to clean such dirty kids. It was hard, but we got it done. Made it easier when we finally made Becky shut up.
Or I could work on Clyde's story. How he accidentally pushed his best friend off a mountain in Italy. Yeah, his best friend was screwing around with his fiance, but it was still an accident.
Robbie's last adventure was in California. There are mountains there, too. Not as special as Italy, but Clyde said the mechanics are the same.
Marty won't let me tell his story yet. He asks how can I tell the story if it isn't finished?
Marty's story is just so hard. I mean, I got the first part right. The kidnapping was easy. And describing the choking sounds took a little work, but I got through it. The last part though, that's holding me back.
I can feel Marty giving me the stink eye.
That's why they aren't talking to me.
Damn.
I suppose I'd better oil the chain saw and dig Ginny up. Just get it done.
Then I can get busy on Jack's story. Jack's is the best of all their stories. It'll be longer than the rest. The research is gonna be exhausting, but it'll be a best seller.
They just know it.
They've been quiet today.
Why today?
So chatty the past few months. Telling me their stories. Making sure I understood everything.
They gave specific instructions so I could write each chapter exactly as they lived them.
Today though, today they have said nothing.
I keep thinking back, did I miss some important detail? Did I did I not strike the right mood?
Are they mad? I feel like are ignoring me they on purpose.
Yeah, they used to get pissed off when I joined my friends for lunch, or drinks on the weekend. But, that hasn't happened for a long time now. My friends don't call anymore.
I mean, it's not like they can just grab their phones and have a chat.
I do kinda miss those spontaneous dates.
But they said it interfered too much with telling the stories. I had to get rid of those friends.
And truth be told, I don't miss them all that much.
Most of the time.
Except for Ginny. Her I miss.
It's particularly hard to get rid of Ginny.
The others, not so much.
Becky was so wrapped up in her kids, she was making me crazy with all the pictures and bragging. Oh my God, the bragging! You'd have thought her kids were geniuses.
Your kids aren't so special now are they, Becky?
And Robbie, constantly off on some adventure where he was the best looking, smartest, funniest...blah blah blah. Of course, all the women just fell all over him, too.
Your last adventure wasn't quite what you expected, was it Robbie?
So, they don't call anymore
But, that was alright. They were still here to talk to me.
I do wish they would have accepted Ginny.
Maybe that's why I'm being ignored. They are mad because I'm still holding on to Ginny.
I bet that's it. As soon as I let go of her, I'll be on the good list again.
I'm just not ready yet. Maybe I can appease them by spiffing up their stories. After all, they want people to read them, right?
Who shall I start with?
Regina. She'll want everyone to understand. She never, ever really meant to hurt her kids. She just wanted to give them baths.
Becky's kids needed baths, too. It made Regina sad how dirty they were. Just like her kids. She could never keep them clean enough. She showed me how to clean such dirty kids. It was hard, but we got it done. Made it easier when we finally made Becky shut up.
Or I could work on Clyde's story. How he accidentally pushed his best friend off a mountain in Italy. Yeah, his best friend was screwing around with his fiance, but it was still an accident.
Robbie's last adventure was in California. There are mountains there, too. Not as special as Italy, but Clyde said the mechanics are the same.
Marty won't let me tell his story yet. He asks how can I tell the story if it isn't finished?
Marty's story is just so hard. I mean, I got the first part right. The kidnapping was easy. And describing the choking sounds took a little work, but I got through it. The last part though, that's holding me back.
I can feel Marty giving me the stink eye.
That's why they aren't talking to me.
Damn.
I suppose I'd better oil the chain saw and dig Ginny up. Just get it done.
Then I can get busy on Jack's story. Jack's is the best of all their stories. It'll be longer than the rest. The research is gonna be exhausting, but it'll be a best seller.
They just know it.
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Saturday, July 25, 2015
Campfire Story
My offering for Master Class Monday on Eat Sleep Write
I chose the prompt forlorn phantasms
Ott felt the muscles twitching under the saddle. He unconsciously squeezed the mare's rib cage, willing her to stay still. The steady north wind hid the blow of breath she uttered to let him know she was not content with the current situation.
"I swear, animal, you're half puma, half ass." He rubbed the velvety hide of her neck as he slid the long rifle from its scabbard. He'd glimpsed furtive movement just outside the light of the fire he'd left burning low.
His pack horse tied near the camp and a carefully placed bedroll gave the appearance of a sleeping cowboy. Ott had walked the black mare up a wooded ridge before sunset to watch for what had been raiding his rations for the past few nights.
As he watched, the pack horse began to dance nervously against its tether. His mare tensed in response to the other animal's discomfort.
"Steady girl," Ott whispered. Moments later three shadows emerged from the brush. Bodies hugging the ground, they moved cautiously toward the camp.
They scuttled soundlessly on four limbs, spider like in their progress. An occasional lift of heads as they checked for scent.
Ott squinted into the dark, trying to identify the creatures. They'd avoided the pack animal and the bedroll, going directly to the food he'd placed on the opposite side of the fire. The trio converged on the meager pile, pushing each other in their silent rush to be first to claim the prize.
Ott sighted down the rifle, finger ready on the trigger. As he steadied to fire, one raised its head. The glow of the coals illuminated the pale face of a child.
Startled, he lowered the gun. When the mare snorted in response to his abrupt movement, all three heads turned his way. They crouched, motionless around the pile of food. Ott felt their eyes fix on him. Tamping down the uneasiness in his gut, Ott prodded his mount forward. She stepped hesitantly down the incline, sensing either his own trepidation or the gazes of the eyes below.
They never stirred as he wove the mare through trees, but Ott sensed them following him. The horse stopped several yards from camp, refusing to move any further. Dismounting with the rifle, he approached slowly, aware of the continued scrutiny. As he came closer he could see the glow of the coals reflected in black eyes. Spindly limbs bent at elbows and knees, they perched on hands and feet, bellies close to the earth. Forgotten children left to fend for themselves.
As he crossed the camp's perimeter, one of them emitted an eerie howl. A return howl combined with renewed rustling in the surrounding brush brought Ott to a halt. The pack horse now panicked, slipped its tether and galloped into the surrounding dark as at least a dozen more forlorn phantasms moved into view.
Ott eased back toward the unnerved whinny of the mare. Any concern he may have felt was swiftly replaced by a knot of fear as the pack moved after him. He turned and sprinted the final distance to his horse, the animal stomping and wild eyed as he vaulted into the saddle. He didn't waste time calming the animal as the brush expelled even more bodies.
He hung on as the mare reared in terror as the horde surrounded them. He kicked her into motion, intending to charge through the mass of bodies. Ott glimpsed, too late the leap that propelled one of them into his chest, knocking him from his seat.
He lay winded within the tightening circle as hoof beats disappeared into the night.
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Thursday, March 12, 2015
Puppy Love
I haven't written for so long, I feel all awkward-y. And, there may be some cursing and a little bitty bit of graphic violence in here, just sayin...
And many thanks to (or laying of blame on) Tara R. from Thin Spiral Notebook for the inspiration.
Archie strolled down the sidewalk ignoring the lure of loud music leaking from the open doors of the clubs lining the street. He'd occasionally glance up at the full moon shining down on the lines of night lifers waiting their turn to get inside.
He let out a sigh, he just wasn't in the mood anymore. .
His spirits had been high as he left his basement apartment and bounded up the steps to street level dressed in his clubster's best. Tight black jeans and ab hugging red polo, his black hair artfully tousled. He was primed for a hip grinding night of dance followed, hopefully, by a light snack before heading back to hide his head in bed.
At the top of the stairs stood a pale figure, obviously waiting tor him. That was where Archie's night began to lose its luster.
"What now, Conner? Did I break another rule? Sleep too late, awaken too damn early?" He'd been in the city a couple months and had immediately stepped on the local brood's toes. Conner had become a regular bearer of criticism
"Gratch wants to see you. You haven't attended a meeting in weeks, and you're overstepping Pike's territory."
"What? Bullshit!" Archie tried to step around Conner, who moved to block him. "Okay. Look, I'll check in with Gratch in the morning. Right now, I'm hungry. Just let me get on with my night." He tried to sidestep again, "And just how much "territory" does Pike have? I haven't hit the same street twice since I've been here."
"If it's east of Talbot Street, it's Pike's. I know you're new, but at least pretend to be considerate. Play west tonight and see Gratch before you crash." Conner gave Archie's outfit a contemptuous once over. "And, dude, wear shades. Your eyes are fuckin' glowing." Conner turned his back and strode quickly away. Archie could still hear him mutter about freaking lone wolf freaks that thought they could do as they pleased.
"You invited me, asshole! And my eyes don't glow!" Archie yelled at Connor's retreating back. He regretted accepting that invitation. Nothing here had been as Conner had promised. It was all rules and checking in and don't go here, or there.
"Bullshit." Archie stubbornly headed east, toward the rising full moon.
He was met at the entrance of the first club by one of Pike's clan. "Not even, jerk. Move on." Archie left. They'd guessed he wouldn't obey and were waiting for him. He'd be outnumbered and knew it wasn't worth the risk.
He turned around and wandered more or less west. The neighborhood changed within a few blocks. He left the boisterous club life behind and found the streets lined with shops that closed before the night took over leaving only smoke filled dives and swaggering working girls. Each half block broken by unlit alleys.
The moon had reached it zenith as he crossed yet another alley. A yelp caught his attention and he stopped to listen.
"Get off ya little piece of shit!" A growl followed by cursing and another yelp piqued Archie's curiosity. He silently entered the alley. Careful to avoid the litter of trash, he made his way farther down the narrow space.
In the dim light from an open door he saw two men digging behind a dumpster at the alley's end. A pasty faced blond held a broom, a sickly thin black man had his right hand wrapped around his left wrist. The smell of fresh blood filled Archie's nostrils. His pace quickened.
The broom wielder thrust his weapon under the dumpster and pulled. A tiny, dirty ball of fur tumbled out. With a growl it headed toward the man with the smell of blood wafting from him. Before the creature could reach him, he aimed a vicious kick at its small form, rolling it across the alley to collide with the wall. The broom made contact eliciting another yelp.
"Hey! What's the deal, dudes? You got to pick on a puppy?" Archie stepped in between them and the injured animal.
"Screw off, kid. The little bastard bit me. It's dead."
Archie grabbed the growling pup by the scruff. "I'd say you provoked the poor thing. It had to defend itself, didn't it?"
"Go home, boy. This ain't your business."
"Well, I just made it my business. So back off and everything will be fine. No one gets hurt, especially the puppy."
The men looked at Archie, then each other. Blondie swung the broom, Archie yanked it from his hand, twirled it baton style then drove it through his throat. As pasty face dropped to the ground gurgling, Archie grabbed his partner before he could recover from shock and run.
"Oh shit man oh shit! I didn't see nuthin' let me go. Didn't know it was your dog so sorry man. Oh shit oh shit!"
"Oh shut up." Archie put the pup down as he grabbed slim's head, jerked it back and sunk his fangs deep into the jugular.
He drank until the heart stopped then dropped the lifeless body. Turning his attention to the blond, he found the pup grunting and growling, furiously tearing flesh from the dead man's throat wound.
"Slow down there,Turbo!" Archie picked the pup up by the scruff again, holding it at arms length as it snapped and snarled. "Dude, you'll make yourself sick gorging like that."
As the animal realized its belly really was full, it settled into Archie's arms. "Bet the Gratch's brood missed you when they decimated that lycan nest last week, huh? Damned intolerant jerks."
"Hmm, Dude or is it Dudette?" His attempt to find out and was rewarded with a growl and nip.
"Okay then." Archie glanced at the west leaning moon. "We'll just wait until we can do a diaper change to check your junk."
With the satiated pup in the crook of his arm, Archie exited the alley. The tiny werewolf lifted its nose and howled mournfully. The full moon dipped a little lower as Archie made a decision.
"I'm pretty sure rescuing you is another no-no. Well, they did say go west."
He grinned, leathery wings ripping through shirt fabric as he lofted into the air and pointed westward, following the moon. "Since you won't give me a hint, we'll go with a gender neutral name, okay?"
"Wanna see the Pacific...Robin?"
And many thanks to (or laying of blame on) Tara R. from Thin Spiral Notebook for the inspiration.
Archie strolled down the sidewalk ignoring the lure of loud music leaking from the open doors of the clubs lining the street. He'd occasionally glance up at the full moon shining down on the lines of night lifers waiting their turn to get inside.
He let out a sigh, he just wasn't in the mood anymore. .
His spirits had been high as he left his basement apartment and bounded up the steps to street level dressed in his clubster's best. Tight black jeans and ab hugging red polo, his black hair artfully tousled. He was primed for a hip grinding night of dance followed, hopefully, by a light snack before heading back to hide his head in bed.
At the top of the stairs stood a pale figure, obviously waiting tor him. That was where Archie's night began to lose its luster.
"What now, Conner? Did I break another rule? Sleep too late, awaken too damn early?" He'd been in the city a couple months and had immediately stepped on the local brood's toes. Conner had become a regular bearer of criticism
"Gratch wants to see you. You haven't attended a meeting in weeks, and you're overstepping Pike's territory."
"What? Bullshit!" Archie tried to step around Conner, who moved to block him. "Okay. Look, I'll check in with Gratch in the morning. Right now, I'm hungry. Just let me get on with my night." He tried to sidestep again, "And just how much "territory" does Pike have? I haven't hit the same street twice since I've been here."
"If it's east of Talbot Street, it's Pike's. I know you're new, but at least pretend to be considerate. Play west tonight and see Gratch before you crash." Conner gave Archie's outfit a contemptuous once over. "And, dude, wear shades. Your eyes are fuckin' glowing." Conner turned his back and strode quickly away. Archie could still hear him mutter about freaking lone wolf freaks that thought they could do as they pleased.
"You invited me, asshole! And my eyes don't glow!" Archie yelled at Connor's retreating back. He regretted accepting that invitation. Nothing here had been as Conner had promised. It was all rules and checking in and don't go here, or there.
"Bullshit." Archie stubbornly headed east, toward the rising full moon.
He was met at the entrance of the first club by one of Pike's clan. "Not even, jerk. Move on." Archie left. They'd guessed he wouldn't obey and were waiting for him. He'd be outnumbered and knew it wasn't worth the risk.
He turned around and wandered more or less west. The neighborhood changed within a few blocks. He left the boisterous club life behind and found the streets lined with shops that closed before the night took over leaving only smoke filled dives and swaggering working girls. Each half block broken by unlit alleys.
The moon had reached it zenith as he crossed yet another alley. A yelp caught his attention and he stopped to listen.
"Get off ya little piece of shit!" A growl followed by cursing and another yelp piqued Archie's curiosity. He silently entered the alley. Careful to avoid the litter of trash, he made his way farther down the narrow space.
In the dim light from an open door he saw two men digging behind a dumpster at the alley's end. A pasty faced blond held a broom, a sickly thin black man had his right hand wrapped around his left wrist. The smell of fresh blood filled Archie's nostrils. His pace quickened.
The broom wielder thrust his weapon under the dumpster and pulled. A tiny, dirty ball of fur tumbled out. With a growl it headed toward the man with the smell of blood wafting from him. Before the creature could reach him, he aimed a vicious kick at its small form, rolling it across the alley to collide with the wall. The broom made contact eliciting another yelp.
"Hey! What's the deal, dudes? You got to pick on a puppy?" Archie stepped in between them and the injured animal.
"Screw off, kid. The little bastard bit me. It's dead."
Archie grabbed the growling pup by the scruff. "I'd say you provoked the poor thing. It had to defend itself, didn't it?"
"Go home, boy. This ain't your business."
"Well, I just made it my business. So back off and everything will be fine. No one gets hurt, especially the puppy."
The men looked at Archie, then each other. Blondie swung the broom, Archie yanked it from his hand, twirled it baton style then drove it through his throat. As pasty face dropped to the ground gurgling, Archie grabbed his partner before he could recover from shock and run.
"Oh shit man oh shit! I didn't see nuthin' let me go. Didn't know it was your dog so sorry man. Oh shit oh shit!"
"Oh shut up." Archie put the pup down as he grabbed slim's head, jerked it back and sunk his fangs deep into the jugular.
He drank until the heart stopped then dropped the lifeless body. Turning his attention to the blond, he found the pup grunting and growling, furiously tearing flesh from the dead man's throat wound.
"Slow down there,Turbo!" Archie picked the pup up by the scruff again, holding it at arms length as it snapped and snarled. "Dude, you'll make yourself sick gorging like that."
As the animal realized its belly really was full, it settled into Archie's arms. "Bet the Gratch's brood missed you when they decimated that lycan nest last week, huh? Damned intolerant jerks."
"Hmm, Dude or is it Dudette?" His attempt to find out and was rewarded with a growl and nip.
"Okay then." Archie glanced at the west leaning moon. "We'll just wait until we can do a diaper change to check your junk."
With the satiated pup in the crook of his arm, Archie exited the alley. The tiny werewolf lifted its nose and howled mournfully. The full moon dipped a little lower as Archie made a decision.
"I'm pretty sure rescuing you is another no-no. Well, they did say go west."
He grinned, leathery wings ripping through shirt fabric as he lofted into the air and pointed westward, following the moon. "Since you won't give me a hint, we'll go with a gender neutral name, okay?"
"Wanna see the Pacific...Robin?"
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Friday, September 12, 2014
The Awakening
Lillian shuffled between the quickly made litter and the defiled clan house, directing the men of MacGoulan in the proper way to secure her human prize, and questioning Sionn.
"You're familiar with the clan chief's sword, are you not?" she asked.
"Aye, I've seen it"
"Have you found it here? Did Donnchadh die with his blade, is it with his body?"
Sionn tried to hide his disgust, "I did not search his remains, old woman! You said to burn it all."
Lillian smirked, "Before you light the fire, search for the sword. If you do not find it, search again after the fire has cleaned up the mess. Search every hovel here. Do not think to defy me, Sionn MacGoulan, don't for a minute think this same fate couldn't visit your home." Without waiting for an answer, she left him glaring after her as she returned to the litter that held Annag.
The hairs rising on Sionn's neck convinced him to follow her commands. He watched as she directed his clansmen to accompany her, carrying the wounded girl with them.
>>>>>
Annag’s dreams were ugly and disordered. In them she ran, trying to escape the terror that began as her wedding feast. Trying not to believe Taog, her betrothed had been torn apart in front of her.
Running from the vision of savaged flesh that had been her mother and the memory of her father being pulled down and slain.
Fleeing the scream of her young sister before her head was ripped from her body.
Trying not to see every one of her clansmen dismembered, bloodied. Dead.
Screaming herself to muffle the soothing voice that kept repeating, "It will be alright."
More frightening was the beast that walked beside her. A man with a wolf’s snout. Claws at the end of each finger. Together they walked from village to village, clan to clan. In each pace they left blood and death behind.
She raised her hands to wipe the tears from her face only to see claws growing from her own fingers.
She screamed in denial.
“It will be alright,girl.” Again the voice. Soothing. Compelling. Terrifying.
She’d cried out repeatedly in her fevered dreams. And each time that voice, those words “it will be alright’” mocked her.
>>>>>
Annag woke from the nightmare at midday. The sun blazing through the window across from her cot. She felt a strange relief, at least she was alone.
The room smelled of burning herbs and the taste on her tongue mirrored them. She tried to raise her head. Dizziness made that impossible. She could see the sky bleached white by the heat of the day. A wind gusted through the window, its breath drawing the last moisture from her mouth.
She lay back on the pillow, her mind sorting the dreams from reality. The burning pain on her back insisting far more of the nightmare was real than not.
Her solitude was too soon broken. The persistent voice from her dreams broke the silence.
“So, Annag, last of MacClarren, you’ve awoken finally.” Lillian filled the small space.
“Where am I? What has happened? I don’t remember, where is my family, where is Taog?” she asked the last question already knowing the answer.
“You are a guest in my home. For now.” The old woman appraised her. “What do you remember, girl?”
“Attack. By… wolves?” Annag closed her eyes as tears began to form, then opened them quickly as memories of blood and death swam behind her lids.
“Wolves?” Lillian snorted, “You know better, girl. The only wolves in this land are the one’s on two legs. How do you even know the word?”
“I don’t…”
“I do. Men that become beasts, the old stories. Wolf? Not really, just animals from a man’s black heart, made real by old magics.”
Annag tried to deny, she shook her head, “no, they are only tales to frighten children! Such things don’t exist, they cannot…”
“They cannot? Were you not frightened, ‘child’?” Lillian sneered at her. “Your clan is dead. MacClarren is no more. No father, chief. No mother. No precious little sister.” Lillian’s voice that had pretended comfort during the nightmares, threw aside the pretense. “And your MacGoulan boy? Ripped apart.”
“Stop! Stop it!” Annag tried to get up from the cot, Lillian pushed her back with the butt of her staff.
“You stop, girl. Stop puling like a babe. You are alive. And hard work it was to keep you that way.” Lillian eyed her sidelong. “What I really want to know, is how you survived, how you slew a dozen shape shifted men and only have a few scratches to show for it.”
Annag’s memories played in her mind. Her father’s blade. Where was her father’s blade. She almost asked the old woman, then hesitated. She had held the broadsword in her hands, where had it gone? Vague recollections of moonlight glinting on the iron. Surely she’d never left the clan house. But, where was the blade?”
She did not trust this old woman. Her answer was half truth, “My clansmen killed them before they fell themselves. I remember being wounded. I must have fainted, the beasts thought me dead already.”
Lillian weighed the words. “Perhaps. Perhaps that is so. We shall see, yes, we shall see.”
“Sionn! I remember Sionn, I want to speak to him, please.” Annag was ready to leave this place, this woman. She could go to MacGoulan, she had been betrothed.
Lillian laughed, “I think you don’t want to speak to Sionn, or any MacGoulan. The scratches you remember, the one’s healing on your pretty back? They carry… well let’s just say a sickness.”
“What do you mean? Am I dying? The babe, I carry a child!”
“Dead is what you’ll both be if you approach any MacGoulan. Those marks mean the beast is in you now, girl. You’re tainted.”
“No! You're lying, lying!” Annag stood up in spite of the dizziness, she wanted to strike Lillian. Stop the words that resurrected the dream. The dream of walking with the beast at her side, leaving death behind.
Lillian smiled knowingly at Annag. “Am I now?”
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Thursday, September 11, 2014
MacGoulan Arrives
More of the Chaos in Progress, this scene is the morning after the attack on Annag's wedding feast. Pt 1 The Wedding Feast Pt 2 Unexpected Guests
The morning sun slid hesitantly through the broken doorway. Flies began to gather around pools of blood and stray limbs. The lazy buzzing a sharp contrast to the panicked screams and roars of rage that filled the house hours earlier.
The small party from clan MacGoulan approached the doorway with blades drawn. Nerves were on edge since entering the cluster of stone huts and encountering unnatural silence. The bodies of the clan hounds, ripped apart, littered the tracks between homes. Their calls of greeting had gone unanswered at the nearest huts.
Sionn reluctantly peered through the doorway of the clan chief's home, then stumbled back, his breakfast returning to his throat.
"They're dead! All dead!", he cried. "Killed same as the hounds, torn..."
Another man had braved a bit farther into the carnage. "Sionn, there's not just the clan dead here. There's animal...I think." He looked around, trying to understand the bodies. The clans people were badly mutilated, the bodies violently torn and shredded. The other dead were more simply slain. By sword or club.
Those dead were not of the clan. Sionn reentered the house. "What kind of men were these?", he muttered as he took in the misshapen faces. More of a muzzle than nose or jaw. Hands that ended in razor sharp claws. ‘Wulver, men that became beasts,” he thought. Nightmares made more chilling by the light of day.
Sean gasped behind him. "Sionn! There are children dead here as well! And this child, this one has no head. Sionn what..." A small moan from the back wall interrupted his morbid inventory.
Sionn drew his broadsword and made his way toward the sound. There he found the woman, her clothing ripped and bloody. A dirk still gripped in trembling hands, her red hair a wild flame about her head.
As Sionn reached for her she scrambled closer to the wall, trying to lift the blade against him.
"Hush girl. I'm Sionn MacGoulan. Are you of MacClarren? Can you say what happened?"
She tried to focus on him, his resemblance to her betrothed returned her voice to her. "Taog? Where is Taog! Where is my mother? Father!" She struggled to stand. As her eyes took in the scene around her, she fell back.
This must be Annag, betrothed of his brother. Sionn threw his arm around her, when he touched her back she screamed in agony. He turned her gently to see what caused the pain. Three deep slashes crossed her back. Blood still seeping weakly from wounds that were an angry red.
Sionn let her fall to the floor. She'd been clawed by the beasts. The old stories made it clear what to do. What had to be done. The wounds were a death sentence. MacGoulan would not abide her, betrothed of Taog or not. She was cursed and they wouldn't suffer her to live, within or without the clan. Though it grieved him, Sionn drew his sword. Grabbing a fistful of the girl’s red hair, he pulled her head back, baring her throat.
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The morning sun slid hesitantly through the broken doorway. Flies began to gather around pools of blood and stray limbs. The lazy buzzing a sharp contrast to the panicked screams and roars of rage that filled the house hours earlier.
“Stop!”
The voice rang through the silence. Startled Sionn turned to the shattered doorway. A figure in long dress holding a crooked staff stood silhouetted by the sun. As she stepped into the room, he could see the wrinkled face of an elderly woman. He shook his head dismissively.
“She is tainted, old woman. And mostly dead anyway,” Sionn said. “She cannot be saved. Besides, you’ve no voice here.” He began to lift his blade again.
“Oh, but I do, boy. I so do.” She tapped her staff on the ground. A vibration began at her feet and traveled swiftly to Sionn. His arm numbed and the blade fell to the floor.
The other men backed warily away. “Don’t run off, now, children. I’ve more work for you.” Shedchuckled as the group looked nervously at each other, waiting for Sionn to tell them what to do.
It was the woman that spoke to them. “ First, bring that girl out of this filth.” When there was no immediately movement, she lifted her staff. Three men hurried to Annag’s side, lifted her roughly and scurried for the door.
“Carefully, children! Let’s not make her wounds any worse! And find a litter, you’ll move her to my home.” She turned to the other men standing amid the carnage. “The rest of you, gather what fuel you can. This must be burned. All of it. Burn the dead hounds as well.”
Sionn spoke finally, “Why not leave the girl to burn, also? She’s cursed. Whatever they were, she carries that taint now. I grew up hearing stories, I’d not believed them before, but, now…I say again, she cannot be saved.”
“I say she will be saved.” The woman’s eyes flashed at Sionn.
He snapped back, “And who are you to say this?”
“Me?” The old woman grinned unpleasantly. “Why, I am Lillian”
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Unexpected Guests
This next part is not as serene as the introductory chapter found here. Annag's life is about to change...
The sun had just begun to set when the clan hounds began to howl.
“Well, my daughter. I’m thinking that MacGoulan has finally arrived to take you away.” Donnchadh took Annag by the shoulders. “I wish only the best in life for you, child.” He blinked back the tears that threatened to escape. “I will sorely miss that sunset hair.” He gave her a great hug then turned quickly away.
Taog came forward to take her hand. They would greet his clansmen together.
The hounds had continued baying, louder and more excited. The laughter and chatter in the house matched their enthusiasm.
Until one of the hounds screamed in pain. And the tone of the baying changed from greeting to terror. Then fell silent.
As Donnchadh reached for his great broadsword, the heavy wooden door burst open. A dozen bodies poured through the opening.
Annag didn’t want to believes what she was seeing. This was not the MacGoulan. This was the stories told late at night to frighten children. These were nightmares come to visit.
“Wulver!” she heard someone cry.
The beasts were upon the gathering in an instant. Taog pushed her behind him as the monsters came. She heard he screams of women and cries of men realizing they were too far from their weapons.
Her father’s blade swung hard at the first wave, one beast yelped in pain and turned away. Then targeted another man with only a heavy chair for defense. The pain maddened attacker ripped it from him, and his arm that had wielded it.
Other men had reached knives or swords, but they were no match for fangs and the claws that grew from hand-like paws.
Taog had no weapon, he made no sound when his throat was torn by gnashing teeth.
Her mother, Mara had joined Donnchadh, an iron fire poker her weapon. Six of the beasts closed on them. Annag heard her father roar his rage just before the hand that held his blade was severed by knife like teeth.
She watched his heavy broadsword fall to the ground. His body followed, pulled down by three of the creatures. She didn’t see her mother being torn apart next to him.
Annag’s eyes were still fixed on the blade. She’d made no sound. Her terror had stolen her screams. But her body lunged for the fallen weapon. Once it was in her hands, she felt her fear turn to anger. With strength she didn’t recognize, she swung the blade.
One beast fell, the wound in its neck pouring blood. She swung again. A second beast snarled in pain. As it backed away, one of her clansmen stuck a knife between its ribs.
She spun around hearing her young sister’s scream. She swung again, but was far too late. A moan fled from her chest as she saw her sweet sister’s head fall from her shoulders. Her grief fuelled fury made certain the beast that was responsible was headless a moment later.
She felt fire skate across her back. She turned, blade singing through the small space. The beast that struck her was already down. The man that slew it lay dying from too many wounds, a small smile gracing his face in that final act.
Annag didn’t know how much time had passed since the attack had begun. She only knew that it was suddenly silent. No more beasts came at her. No more screams of her clan. No more growls of the unnatural beasts.
As she became aware of her rasping breath, her racing heart, her eyes took in the horror before them. Her family, her people, dismembered, mutilated, all dead. The silence was broken by one last scream. She fell to the ground as it escaped her exhausted body.
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Monday, March 11, 2013
Blowing Bubbles

/>Write at the Merge, Week 11Two photos this week for you to reflect upon:(I chose this one.)
Trifecta Challenge; Week Sixty-eightCongratulations to the weekend's winners, and on to the weekly prompt.
TIME (noun)
1a : the measured or measurable period during which an action, process, or condition exists or continues : duration
b : a nonspatial continuum that is measured in terms of events which succeed one another from past through present to future
c : leisure <time for reading>
2: the point or period when something occurs : occasion
3a : an appointed, fixed, or customary moment or hour for something to happen, begin, or end <arrived ahead of time>
b : an opportune or suitable moment <decided it was time to retire> —often used in the phrase about time <about time for a change>
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The children squealed in delight. Bubbles! Hundreds of bubbles. Iridescent globes, dancing through the forest on the whim of gust and breeze.
They chased the fragile spheres, shrieking in glee. Bubbles hung from branches, flashing with reflections of leaf and bough. They caught in the undergrowth, where little hands tried to capture them whole.
At the far side of the forest, the ground rose through gentle foothills to the mountains beyond. She perched on a sunny outcrop watching the forest edge, puffs of smoke curling from her nostrils with each breath. Her wings folded in readiness against golden scales.
"Is it time for lunch yet, Mama?"
She flicked her gaze toward her dragonet, still marvelling at the strange emissions flowing from her tiny throat.
"Not yet, Baby, let them get clear of the trees."
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Thursday, February 7, 2013
Old Acquaintances
This image and These words from "Some Night" by FUN: I found a martyr in my bed tonightShe stops my bones from wondering just who I am, who I am, who I am

Tiger Eyes – Master Class 2013 #5
Congratulations to Carrie!
In keeping with “changing it up,” when I asked Carrie for a line from a novel, I asked her to give me the last line. That’s right class, this week, you have to END on the prompt, not begin with it. Carrie chose Judy Blume’s Tiger Eyes, which ends with:
Maybe that’s the way it’s supposed to be.
and on to the story...
and on to the story...
Liam hunched through the afternoon downpour. His footing was sure on the rain slicked rocks as he climbed the rise toward the abandoned chapel. At the foot of the cracked and weather warped granite steps he stopped to survey ruin. The walls were mostly intact, the turrets not all crumbled.
He mounted the first six stairs. Before he could reach the topmost step, a rush of air pushed him back. Leathery wings spread wide, framing a bestial face. The features were the same shade as the walls of the chapel. The cheeks and forehead were similarly marred by the erosion of years and weather.
"Thou shalt not enter this holy house, Liam Braden." Its voice was as eroded as its face.
"Ye're not serious, are ye? Tis my family land, gargoyle."
"Thou art unclean. Thee may not enter."
"Unclean? I'm soakin' wet!" Liam attempted to side step the creature.
A rock hard hand gently blocked his move. "I am sworn to keep the unclean out of God's house. Thou hast partaken of human flesh, Liam Braden."
"Ah, that. Well, they was already departed this world. It's not like I slew them meself."
"And thou hast committed murderer."
"Self defense." Liam countered.
The wings spread as the monster stood to full height. "The murder of thy Father and Mother were not self defense, nor the killing of thy siblings!"
Liam sighed, "No, but I was under a compulsion. It was not me fault."
It was the gargoyle's turn to sigh. "A geas set upon thee as the price for the dark gift thee chose to cheat death. Thou cannot deceive me."
"Alright. Ye've got a point. But, honestly, how holy can this place still be? None have worshipped here for centuries. And besides, I helped me father raise ye to the tower. T'was meself that named ye. Cedric." Liam grinned. "Ye were marvelous! All grim power and stony strength."
"Thee was a good boy then, Liam. Cedric, yes, I remember."
"Then let me in, old friend. We'll reminisce."
Cedric pondered a moment. "My strength is not what it was, I am lonely. Against my judgement, I bid thee enter Liam Braden."
Together, they walked into the nave. Liam was surprised and unexpectedly pleased to see the stained glass behind the pulpit was intact. The weak light of the dreary day muted the once vibrant hues as they tinted the decomposing body that lay across the podium.
He glanced sidelong at the creature next to him. "Ye've been entertaining?"
"Badly behaved youngsters. They thought to practice the black mass. In fact, summoned a demon before I could rouse myself. I had to put a stop to that."
"And the others?"
"Fled. This one chose to martyr herself for her demon." Cedric gazed sadly at the corpse. "A wasted effort. I sent it back to Hell anyway."
"I see." Liam eyed the remains hungrily, "Perhaps I was sent to help ye cleanse the house. I could, oh, dispose of that bit a mess for ye."
"Ghouls!" Cedric rolled his stony eyes. "Alright then.Maybe that's the way its supposed to be."
Wednesday, January 23, 2013
All That Glitters...
Trifecta: Week Sixty-oneThis week's word is:
BITCH (noun)
1: the female of the dog or some other carnivorous mammals
2 a : a lewd or immoral woman
b : a malicious, spiteful, or overbearing woman —sometimes used as a generalized term of abuse
3: something that is extremely difficult, objectionable, or unpleasant
2 a : a lewd or immoral woman
b : a malicious, spiteful, or overbearing woman —sometimes used as a generalized term of abuse
3: something that is extremely difficult, objectionable, or unpleasant
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"What in the name of God have you done?"
My sister, Abby, and I jumped at Aunt Lyds' screech, sending a cloud of pink and purple sparkles shimmering into the air.
"Shit," I muttered as I tried to contain the iridescent dust settling over the table.
"What just came out of your mouth, Christine Diane!" Great Aunt Lyds screeched again.
"Nothing, Aunt Lyds." I rolled my eyes, hoping she didn't catch that. "I'm just helping Abby decorate some Valentine's card with glitter."
"Glitter?" She sneered. "Demon spawn! That's what it is!"
"Wha..." Thankfully, Mom came to see what the ruckus was.
"Lydia, what are you doing our of your room? Stop scaring the girls with your nonsense." Mom took her Aunt's arm and gently led her back to her room. "Christine, you girls clean up now. It's almost dinner time." She called over her shoulder.
Abby and I got busy brushing the stray glitter into the trash can. I knew what Aunt Lyds meant, getting all that stuff cleaned up was a bitch.
At least I thought I knew.
Aunt Lyds stopped coming out of her room a few days later.
"I warned you!" She hollered almost hourly in her usual screech, "Demon spawn!"
That's when I started to notice. First, a small winking pink line began to creep out of the seam where the halves of the dining table met.
Then, a pink sparkle oozed from between the couch cushions.
One morning, Abby started screaming hysterically at breakfast. Her oaten O's were dotted in glitter. At that moment, the cat raced by yowling in panic. A stream of glowing purple dust trailing behind her.
"Mom? Mom! I think we have a problem!"
"What problem, honey?" she called from the kitchen.
"The glitter, Mom, it's everywhere!"
"Don't be silly, honey," She came up behind me as I turned and watched her pink glittered nails fussing with her purple glittered hair. "It's only glitter." She smiled through shiny, glittery teeth.
Wednesday, January 9, 2013
Out of the Woods
this was more fun! The assignment: you will be presented with the opening sentence of a famous (or not so famous) book. You are to write a story using the same first sentence;
Dodie Smith’s “I Capture the Castle” whose opening sentence is:
I write this sitting in the kitchen sink.
I write this sitting in the kitchen sink because it’s the only place that’s safe. I don’t know what the little bastards are, but they're mean and there’s a lot of them.
They came from the woods. I suppose it’s my own fault, sort of. Something was getting into the trash cans, so I put out live traps. Figured I’d catch ‘coons or 'possums raiding the garbage. Boy, was I wrong!
I went out the next morning and there was one of those little buggers in the trap. Snarling and glaring with pure hate. It was only about eight or nine inches tall, slick gray hide mottled with ugly purple. And teeth, it had nasty, yellow, pointy teeth. Lots of ‘em. Along with nasty, black claws. I may have screamed.
So I got a shovel out of the shed, prepared to beat the shit out of it. Of course, I couldn’t do that with the cage closed, and I wasn't about to open it. So I got the garden hose, prepared to drown the critter.
It didn’t drown. I hit it with the water and it screeched an awful snarly screech. Then it shriveled up like a raisin and fell into pieces. I may have screamed again.
But at least it was gone and my garbage was safe.
Hah!
I was fixing my supper when I heard the trash can lid hit the ground. “Damn,” I thought, “ there can’t be another one.”
But oh yeah, there was another one, or twelve or twenty. And they were pissed. It wasn’t just the trash they were after this time.
I went out yelling, intending to grab the hose and “raisin” the whole bunch of ‘em. It’s my belief that’s what they were waiting for. I wasn’t two steps out the door before they were after me. I know I screamed then.
I hightailed it back inside, but them sonuvabitches is quick. They got inside with me.
I couldn’t get to the bathroom, so I ended up here in the sink. I’ve got the dish sprayer, and I “raisined” a couple. I managed to reach a grill fork and stabbed another two or three, they bleed foul smelling, yellow yuck, but that doesn’t seem to kill ‘em. Just slows ‘em down a bit.
The water is what gets ‘em. They’ve backed off for a while. I’m not sure where they went, but I’ll be damned if I’m getting out of the sink.
Shit, I think I hear ‘em coming back. They sound kinda gleeful…
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Thursday, May 17, 2012
Aftermath
This is some of the back story a character I've been working with. Annag is pronounced Anak, Scottish Gaelic for Anne.
Annag, the lone surviving soul of Clan MacClarren, awoke in the unfamiliar bed, trying to die. Escape.
Escape the terror that began as her wedding feast.
Trying not to believe her betrothed had been torn apart in front of her.
Escape the vision of savaged flesh that had been her mother.
Trying not to remember her father being pulled down and slain.
Escape the scream of her young sister before her head was ripped from her body.
Trying not to see every one of her clansmen dismembered, bloodied. Dead.
Escape the soothing voice that kept repeating, "It will be alright."
This is my offering for Lance's #100wordsong.
The track this week is The Beatles; Revolution
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Saturday, February 4, 2012
The Hunt

We’ve asked you to show us in 400 words or less how your character reacts to a piece of music. Did music advance a story line or flesh out a character–or both?
The door was locked and the blinds drawn. Anne Marie contemplated the gear laid out on the old chest. How many years had it been since she done a real hunt? Too many?
“Look at the way we gotta hide what we’re doin’…”
She reached for the hilt of her hunting blade. It nestled comfortably into her hand, eroded to her fingers by heavy use over countless years. It bled confidence into her, she was still fit, still trained daily. She was still the best.
“Cause what would they say if they ever knew…”
She could feel it behind her, stalking. The beast that was also a man. But this wasn't a man afflicted with a curse. This was a monster reveling it’s blood rage. This one didn't want to learn control. This one embraced the beast and lusted for the kill.
“And so, we’re running just as fast as we can…”
The black leotard she wore moved like a second skin, the soft boots nearly soundless in the leaf litter of the woods. Her hand reached to softly touch the hilt again, reassuring her with its presence.
“Holdin’ on to one another’s hand…”
She shifted direction, made a few turns. Soon she was behind the beast. Anne Marie could smell the animal odor, mingled with sweat and dirty human. She was close now. She drew the ancient blade from its sheath.
“I think we’re alone now, there doesn’t seem to be anyone around…”
Closer now, she could hear its breath huffing as it tracked its prey. Or rather what it thought was its prey. She stepped from behind a tree, blade at the ready. It realized its mistake and turned.
“I think we’re alone now, the beating of our hearts is the only sound.”
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