Compose a post in the form of a text–160 characters.
Your text must elicit or express fear.
where are you you said you'd be here voices they say bad things about you they're laughing and laughing closer and closer I see them they're coming please hurry
oh, scary laughter is the worst... ack!
ReplyDeleteOh scary laughing!
ReplyDeleteThat? I can hear!
Which means that you? Rocked this!
I like this. I envision someone in a dark park... waiting.
ReplyDeleteScary laughter...shivering
ReplyDeleteI liked "they say bad things about you" that's a little detail that makes it even creepier.
I like the frenzy that you capture here - this person is obviously freaking out. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou have me wondering if it's really happening or the scary voices in her/his head. Great text! :>
ReplyDeleteLovely use of the lack of punctuation to create a an unstable narrator!
ReplyDeletethe laughter is grating on my nerves now, like fingernails on a chalkboard!
ReplyDeletePsychosis slip? Love.
ReplyDeleteI hate scary, laughing voices. Definitely creepy!
ReplyDeleteNice and creepy, good stuff!!!
ReplyDeleteNice text...I'm left wanting more and wondering exactly what they're laughing at...
ReplyDeleteCreepy good! You definitely sense the fear and anxiety. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThis would freak me out but not sure if it would make me hurry toward the writer of that text! Good job.
ReplyDeleteSpooky great! I'd be freaked out big time.
ReplyDeleteVery creepy. I accidentally deleted the comment you left on my blog :(
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