Thursday, October 20, 2011

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Write On Edge: Red-Writing-Hood
Compose a post in the form of a text–160 characters.

Your text must elicit or express fear.



where are you you said you'd be here voices they say bad things about you they're laughing and laughing closer and closer I see them they're coming please hurry

16 comments:

  1. oh, scary laughter is the worst... ack!

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  2. Oh scary laughing!

    That? I can hear!

    Which means that you? Rocked this!

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  3. I like this. I envision someone in a dark park... waiting.

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  4. Scary laughter...shivering

    I liked "they say bad things about you" that's a little detail that makes it even creepier.

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  5. I like the frenzy that you capture here - this person is obviously freaking out. Good job!

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  6. You have me wondering if it's really happening or the scary voices in her/his head. Great text! :>

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  7. Lovely use of the lack of punctuation to create a an unstable narrator!

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  8. the laughter is grating on my nerves now, like fingernails on a chalkboard!

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  9. I hate scary, laughing voices. Definitely creepy!

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  10. Nice and creepy, good stuff!!!

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  11. Nice text...I'm left wanting more and wondering exactly what they're laughing at...

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  12. Creepy good! You definitely sense the fear and anxiety. Nice job.

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  13. This would freak me out but not sure if it would make me hurry toward the writer of that text! Good job.

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  14. Very creepy. I accidentally deleted the comment you left on my blog :(

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