Sunday, September 1, 2013


Trifextra: Week Eighty-Three

like standing on glass
the wait to end this chapter
i covet new adventures

I'm sneaking in at the last minute.  I managed to do this prompt.  Probably because it didn't require too many brain cells.  Most of mine are dormant, I think.
Here's our assignment...

HAIKU (noun) : an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively - See more at:


  1. Yep. Dead brain cells. I failed at syllable counting the last line. Sigh.

  2. You've got seven in the last line. Did you change it? Either way, I like your haiku. I think I've been in that spot you're describing. Thanks for linking up.

  3. Like it... despite a little to many syllables (myself I rarely count)

  4. Like standing on glass... I'll be thinking about that one!

  5. It may have too many syllables, but it still sounds pretty.