Trifextra: Week Eighty-Threelike standing on glass
the wait to end this chapter
i covet new adventures
I'm sneaking in at the last minute. I managed to do this prompt. Probably because it didn't require too many brain cells. Most of mine are dormant, I think.
Here's our assignment...
HAIKU (noun) : an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively - See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.OFOn7j4K.dpuf
Yep. Dead brain cells. I failed at syllable counting the last line. Sigh.
ReplyDeleteYou've got seven in the last line. Did you change it? Either way, I like your haiku. I think I've been in that spot you're describing. Thanks for linking up.
ReplyDeleteLike it... despite a little to many syllables (myself I rarely count)
ReplyDeleteLike standing on glass... I'll be thinking about that one!
ReplyDeleteIt may have too many syllables, but it still sounds pretty.
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