tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post8785018259922599944..comments2023-05-14T03:34:24.671-04:00Comments on Elsetime & Otherwhen: SemanticsReneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-25423628886906754382013-04-21T18:19:58.684-04:002013-04-21T18:19:58.684-04:00Brilliant use of the words!Brilliant use of the words!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-60887568584026159352013-04-21T17:28:43.235-04:002013-04-21T17:28:43.235-04:00lost, stole ... ! Lillian sure is in trouble ......lost, stole ... ! Lillian sure is in trouble ... Brilliant, Renee :)ShreyaKashyaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00256245317017202469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-13197342827452301472013-04-21T14:49:10.810-04:002013-04-21T14:49:10.810-04:00Ooh, I love how Aslozoth busts the "demon bit...Ooh, I love how Aslozoth busts the "demon bitch" (love that!) for lying to him by omission... I'm looking forward to hearing Lillian's response to that! ;-) Brilliant writing, Renee! <br />Danahttp://blarrgh.danas.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-15069876404419575942013-04-21T14:04:27.211-04:002013-04-21T14:04:27.211-04:00This is great Renee! Such a creative take on the p...This is great Renee! Such a creative take on the prompt. Here's hoping Lillian has a little something up her sleeve!Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10380277216952785078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-41341553241816660622013-04-21T07:56:41.757-04:002013-04-21T07:56:41.757-04:00Your thirty-three words seem so much more than min...Your thirty-three words seem so much more than mine. :-) Great job fleshing out a tale in such a short space.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-51745905628492207312013-04-21T00:28:16.555-04:002013-04-21T00:28:16.555-04:00The Undead team wanted to nominate you for a Liebs...The Undead team wanted to nominate you for a Liebster award. Please come get it if you like!<br />http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2013/04/the-liebster-award.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13492500438485341912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-26125815280140401682013-04-20T21:35:36.224-04:002013-04-20T21:35:36.224-04:00Yipe. Amend the charge - Perfect words.Yipe. Amend the charge - Perfect words.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-76366106457680698032013-04-20T20:20:59.215-04:002013-04-20T20:20:59.215-04:00yes, agreeing with Lance . . . I want more of the ...yes, agreeing with Lance . . . I want more of the tale. :)barbarahttp://purplemoose.kenaiwriter.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-64692353941920690942013-04-20T20:14:48.165-04:002013-04-20T20:14:48.165-04:00action, edgy dialogue, and me wanting another 1036...action, edgy dialogue, and me wanting another 1036 words. excellent.Lancehttp://lancemyblogcanbeatupyourblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-72373866920640245842013-04-20T20:12:11.303-04:002013-04-20T20:12:11.303-04:00hahaha Love this! xD Character studies are great f...hahaha Love this! xD Character studies are great fun! I know I've used 33-word prompts for them before.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-69514376421520041502013-04-20T16:47:57.492-04:002013-04-20T16:47:57.492-04:00I love this Renee! The tone is so much darker now...I love this Renee! The tone is so much darker now now! Oh to know what happens next...Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-50336974790549518612013-04-20T15:37:24.620-04:002013-04-20T15:37:24.620-04:00Perfectly clever.Perfectly clever.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-44940055351577107162013-04-20T11:12:06.584-04:002013-04-20T11:12:06.584-04:00I think he's mad! Very good...I think he's mad! Very good...Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-21161778038895466272013-04-20T10:15:53.643-04:002013-04-20T10:15:53.643-04:00yup, I'd go back to lost & I'm looking...yup, I'd go back to lost & I'm looking for it now...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-52374688891588117332013-04-19T19:29:59.293-04:002013-04-19T19:29:59.293-04:00I think there is a touch of humour about, lovely w...I think there is a touch of humour about, lovely writing in this demonic scene of fantasy, but the humour comes from him being a bit of a fool...no warrior ever, ever loses his sword, so it shows aside that is flawed..though the sword is maybe...stolen..clearly!Piratehttp://yepirategunn.weebly.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-5595524899416840462013-04-19T18:56:54.654-04:002013-04-19T18:56:54.654-04:00Nice piece. I wish there was more to it.Nice piece. I wish there was more to it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-3477977835751226732013-04-19T18:38:17.997-04:002013-04-19T18:38:17.997-04:00I really liked this, Renee. Perfect use of all th...I really liked this, Renee. Perfect use of all three words to make your story.tedstrutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09853272125990540823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-34908578862724740732013-04-19T18:33:21.216-04:002013-04-19T18:33:21.216-04:00uh oh...Lillian is going to get her butt kicked......uh oh...Lillian is going to get her butt kicked...unless she magically makes that sword appear...to either give back to the demon OR to kill him :)Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-55056248012973316402013-04-19T16:10:44.251-04:002013-04-19T16:10:44.251-04:00I don't think this will end well! I like how ...I don't think this will end well! I like how you worked the words in - especially "charge".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-84277502834527243002013-04-19T13:38:58.360-04:002013-04-19T13:38:58.360-04:00Ooooh, Lillian's in trouble! (said in that si...Ooooh, Lillian's in trouble! (said in that sing-song voice kids use) Fun take on the prompt.Nennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17983701512986824779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-16649992979922306062013-04-19T13:28:53.030-04:002013-04-19T13:28:53.030-04:00perfect and FUNNY! Oh yes, this was wonderful. &qu...perfect and FUNNY! Oh yes, this was wonderful. "Amend the charge" what a fantastic way to accuse her. <br /><br />HAPPY WEEKEND Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-13202981687627384902013-04-19T11:57:25.192-04:002013-04-19T11:57:25.192-04:00Ha. Funny. Love humor in fantasy, hard to do! Thes...Ha. Funny. Love humor in fantasy, hard to do! These two seem like supernatural frenemy's! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-45004813681588616182013-04-19T11:32:01.974-04:002013-04-19T11:32:01.974-04:00Ah,great play on words here & Lillian has it c...Ah,great play on words here & Lillian has it coming-she better run!:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.com