tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post6764191753462111192..comments2023-05-14T03:34:24.671-04:00Comments on Elsetime & Otherwhen: RedemptionReneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-27557424808422540072013-03-17T17:29:17.918-04:002013-03-17T17:29:17.918-04:00that was a very soothing piece. the sense of calm ...that was a very soothing piece. the sense of calm from hot to cold, very well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-51350139533379630302013-03-17T16:37:08.649-04:002013-03-17T16:37:08.649-04:00Lovely and visceral! Lovely and visceral! Silversound7http://www.writelovelive.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-15008968733334878222013-03-17T11:32:43.504-04:002013-03-17T11:32:43.504-04:00The gooseflesh made me think that they were maybe ...The gooseflesh made me think that they were maybe being lulled into peace against their will. But that's clearly just me! I too loved the hot/cold contrast and the moistness. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-9789402290868602672013-03-16T19:21:53.664-04:002013-03-16T19:21:53.664-04:00Nice interplay of hot and cold.Nice interplay of hot and cold.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-73651376709657713962013-03-16T17:55:21.010-04:002013-03-16T17:55:21.010-04:00So lovely! Makes me long for those warm summer day...So lovely! Makes me long for those warm summer days under the sprinkler... Well done!Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10380277216952785078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-28265845831024635922013-03-16T17:39:44.988-04:002013-03-16T17:39:44.988-04:00Thank you, Sarah! I was hoping that would come ac...Thank you, Sarah! I was hoping that would come across.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-69804468568567631072013-03-16T17:39:00.857-04:002013-03-16T17:39:00.857-04:00Thanks, Draug, so did I as I was writing.Thanks, Draug, so did I as I was writing.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-59091092936154084002013-03-16T17:38:33.483-04:002013-03-16T17:38:33.483-04:00Thank you, Steven!Thank you, Steven!Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-38305911358474874332013-03-16T17:38:19.181-04:002013-03-16T17:38:19.181-04:00Thank you, Amy! I appreciate your comment, and I&...Thank you, Amy! I appreciate your comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-4626775839615985042013-03-16T17:36:38.639-04:002013-03-16T17:36:38.639-04:00Thanks, Barbara! Sometimes the Muse just has her ...Thanks, Barbara! Sometimes the Muse just has her way with me. ;-)Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-13449912039485908092013-03-16T17:35:50.439-04:002013-03-16T17:35:50.439-04:00Thank you! I'm glad you stopped by.Thank you! I'm glad you stopped by.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-38522183911565711102013-03-16T16:26:25.614-04:002013-03-16T16:26:25.614-04:00Oooh, I felt that drop in temperature. Well done.Oooh, I felt that drop in temperature. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-44183803707512467602013-03-16T09:36:36.226-04:002013-03-16T09:36:36.226-04:00Ooo I felt the gooseflesh rising on my arms!Ooo I felt the gooseflesh rising on my arms!Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-40028300467467110482013-03-16T03:26:46.757-04:002013-03-16T03:26:46.757-04:00nice descriptionsnice descriptionsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-26428604334254038542013-03-16T02:09:14.520-04:002013-03-16T02:09:14.520-04:00Renee, I love how you blended mood, movement, and ...Renee, I love how you blended mood, movement, and temperature together. The picture is evocative, and you did the prompt associated with it proud!<br /><br />Thanks also for stopping by my blog and commenting. Good work, hon. Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/03/15/mama-needs-a-brand-new-bag-a-barlette/Sharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-50794040551923042042013-03-16T00:32:46.695-04:002013-03-16T00:32:46.695-04:00pockets of relief and reflection - that is a beaut...pockets of relief and reflection - that is a beautiful turn of phrase.barbarahttp://purplemoose.kenaiwriter.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-86084178350769906022013-03-15T23:54:34.428-04:002013-03-15T23:54:34.428-04:00The chill cooling and containing heat. A good line...The chill cooling and containing heat. A good line.katie eggemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00615362861509258088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-50873934029713761902013-03-15T22:21:49.901-04:002013-03-15T22:21:49.901-04:00Thank you, Valerie! I can't leave well enough...Thank you, Valerie! I can't leave well enough alone. Gotta go weirdo.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-76105969359065335422013-03-15T21:53:04.166-04:002013-03-15T21:53:04.166-04:00I love the sense of calm that washes over this pie...I love the sense of calm that washes over this piece as it progresses-until "angry sweat gives way to goose flesh." <br /><br />Amazingly written!!Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.com