tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post4301024320304344868..comments2023-05-14T03:34:24.671-04:00Comments on Elsetime & Otherwhen: No MercyReneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-6432511753971039222013-03-11T02:25:08.077-04:002013-03-11T02:25:08.077-04:00wow!! this is a chillingly great piece!wow!! this is a chillingly great piece!barbarahttp://purplemoose.kenaiwriter.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-80413055282000494162013-03-10T15:49:28.808-04:002013-03-10T15:49:28.808-04:00Terrible how we are so quick to join the fray. Chi...Terrible how we are so quick to join the fray. Chilling portrayal, Renee!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-32774354143731919152013-03-10T15:09:35.149-04:002013-03-10T15:09:35.149-04:00Horribly sad.Horribly sad.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-28279477636452486992013-03-10T14:15:09.966-04:002013-03-10T14:15:09.966-04:00Very intense and full of despair. A heartbreaker. ...Very intense and full of despair. A heartbreaker. Well done!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-56769875043165019302013-03-10T13:17:21.592-04:002013-03-10T13:17:21.592-04:00This is really strong! Very good.This is really strong! Very good.Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-67831363084475828492013-03-10T09:25:09.432-04:002013-03-10T09:25:09.432-04:00That last line-so wrenching! It would be the wors...That last line-so wrenching! It would be the worst pain-even more than the pain caused by the actual stones. I am so impressed at the emotion you packed into these 33 words Renee! Well done!!Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-36074609201947325792013-03-09T20:22:40.305-05:002013-03-09T20:22:40.305-05:00Terribly moving and real.Terribly moving and real.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10020430647050532416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-60865463074152732732013-03-09T11:37:46.870-05:002013-03-09T11:37:46.870-05:00Scary.. The one without sin should cast the first ...Scary.. The one without sin should cast the first stone.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-33848212620251494742013-03-09T09:36:58.111-05:002013-03-09T09:36:58.111-05:00Ohh..what a terrible scenario!It makes us realize ...Ohh..what a terrible scenario!It makes us realize how fortunate so many of us are, to have never seen this sad,ugly,terrible yet real face of hunger & poverty!A power packed piece of writing ,leaving one gasping!Great job,Renee!Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-9636021925648302012013-03-09T06:24:10.334-05:002013-03-09T06:24:10.334-05:00This is really timely for me, as I'm reading J...This is really timely for me, as I'm reading James Orbinski's book about the wars and famines in Africa and Afghanistan. Seems a page out of his book.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-19633383422151323672013-03-08T22:17:26.087-05:002013-03-08T22:17:26.087-05:00Very well written. That last line was chilling.Very well written. That last line was chilling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-65326361586453833802013-03-08T21:28:55.839-05:002013-03-08T21:28:55.839-05:00Period piece that shows the state of the world, no...Period piece that shows the state of the world, now. Brilliant. This is smart, interesting and well-written.Lancehttp://lancemyblogcanbeatupyourblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-58773191488702712642013-03-08T19:21:24.036-05:002013-03-08T19:21:24.036-05:00Very serious and moving piece. Very well written....Very serious and moving piece. Very well written. Beautiful use of your 33 words. :)Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-65772709667389112812013-03-08T14:28:49.649-05:002013-03-08T14:28:49.649-05:00That last line - wow. Talk about dark...That last line - wow. Talk about dark...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-47276483064679578102013-03-08T14:07:58.229-05:002013-03-08T14:07:58.229-05:00very good. so much in so few words.very good. so much in so few words.christinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02983259980848913151noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-91440073939959910292013-03-08T13:47:48.143-05:002013-03-08T13:47:48.143-05:00Well done I was wondering if any one would get sto...Well done I was wondering if any one would get stoned on this exersiceAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-11810267853414791062013-03-08T13:11:13.077-05:002013-03-08T13:11:13.077-05:00reminds me of Les Miserables, about how even the &...reminds me of Les Miserables, about how even the "LIVING" we are judged and ridiculed, sometimes even by our own. <br /><br />I sat with this for a moment, it's very good. <br /><br />Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-18064014573913764642013-03-08T11:38:05.306-05:002013-03-08T11:38:05.306-05:00This is very evocative, I really like it.This is very evocative, I really like it.Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03946042707794806737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-18455347401967067542013-03-08T11:23:12.723-05:002013-03-08T11:23:12.723-05:00This is good, grim but good.
Katie atBankerchick S...This is good, grim but good.<br />Katie at<a href="http://bankerchick-writerscramp.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Bankerchick Scratchings</a>katie eggemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00615362861509258088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-40591713425922252092013-03-08T11:03:37.938-05:002013-03-08T11:03:37.938-05:00That wonderful last line,double whammy! Betrayal a...That wonderful last line,double whammy! Betrayal and starvation. Nicely done, Renee!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-64081027536884412272013-03-08T10:54:09.309-05:002013-03-08T10:54:09.309-05:00This is horrible! (The story, not the writing.) ...This is horrible! (The story, not the writing.) Food is one of the necessities of life and it's so sad the need isn't met for all.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-6377514715423466612013-03-08T10:16:39.232-05:002013-03-08T10:16:39.232-05:00): This is so sad. It's worse because stuff li...): This is so sad. It's worse because stuff like this still happens. A moving piece.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.com