tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post337870268633292546..comments2023-05-14T03:34:24.671-04:00Comments on Elsetime & Otherwhen: AncestryReneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-18520827982334843402013-04-19T23:11:57.116-04:002013-04-19T23:11:57.116-04:00I love the balance of magic and mystery with groun...I love the balance of magic and mystery with grounding in reality... And children are the best at seeing the truth of people.Biancahttp://biancanoire.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-24667342340232377912013-04-19T13:23:15.119-04:002013-04-19T13:23:15.119-04:00Very interesting way of weaving it all together. I...Very interesting way of weaving it all together. I look forward to reading more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-56730640702395115922013-04-19T10:19:39.688-04:002013-04-19T10:19:39.688-04:00I want to know how Caroline knows who Anne Marie i...I want to know how Caroline knows who Anne Marie is!Transferred Memorieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06450127223578208184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-39681975039039170752013-04-18T22:59:06.320-04:002013-04-18T22:59:06.320-04:00All things are eventually connected, or reunited, ...All things are eventually connected, or reunited, in some way.<br /><br />Full circle. I like this story and look forward to reading more!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-77377386047000637062013-04-18T21:24:12.352-04:002013-04-18T21:24:12.352-04:00Oh woooow!!!!! Such a haunting, sad story!!! Reall...Oh woooow!!!!! Such a haunting, sad story!!! Really beautifully written!<br /><br /><br />artographja.comTomekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15239843805321425212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-43368368160821604112013-04-18T17:25:37.583-04:002013-04-18T17:25:37.583-04:00The scene was well set from the very beginning. I...The scene was well set from the very beginning. I felt like I was right there.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-40995117410765516872013-04-18T17:12:43.029-04:002013-04-18T17:12:43.029-04:00I liked this story very much. There was a good mys...I liked this story very much. There was a good mystery to it and your pacing was wonderful in that you gave me hints, but not the full story until the ending. <br /><br />You realized, however, you left me lots of unresolved questions. I hope you will write the next chapter:~)Sarahttp://www.sarahealy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-44451905781750949812013-04-18T16:16:06.523-04:002013-04-18T16:16:06.523-04:00Intriguing to say the least-am dying to know what ...Intriguing to say the least-am dying to know what the connection is!She traced the bloodline for two generations or more?Oh Renee,don't leave us hanging-I want more:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-12076392873000277112013-04-18T11:34:36.117-04:002013-04-18T11:34:36.117-04:00I love a good matriarchy. The varying degrees of r...I love a good matriarchy. The varying degrees of recognition is an excellent touch.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-48044396633882483102013-04-18T11:27:38.554-04:002013-04-18T11:27:38.554-04:00Such a captivating set-up! It makes we wonder if t...Such a captivating set-up! It makes we wonder if there is more to come!kdillmanjoneshttp://kdillmanjones.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-24567501511154774342013-04-18T07:22:44.196-04:002013-04-18T07:22:44.196-04:00I love the description here. I can clearly see the...I love the description here. I can clearly see the beach and all the people without feeling like you've just told me about it. You've done a wonderful job. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-10449609102138114582013-04-17T18:47:22.536-04:002013-04-17T18:47:22.536-04:00You've got a real way with words, and a skill ...You've got a real way with words, and a skill at painting a deep canvas with the lightest of touches. Great piece.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-86851099544756498072013-04-17T16:04:56.091-04:002013-04-17T16:04:56.091-04:00very interesting connection point in time with won...very interesting connection point in time with wonderfully collected details showcased in a small segmentAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-34120229890532186732013-04-17T15:46:37.172-04:002013-04-17T15:46:37.172-04:00I love that they knew who she was. I love coming t...I love that they knew who she was. I love coming to read you because I know that things are never quite what they seem, you have a honed sense of the turn, so I got super excited when you set it up (perfectly) as a woman mourning the loss of universal things and then threw in the supernatural.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-31770509318851938972013-04-17T13:31:33.703-04:002013-04-17T13:31:33.703-04:00A very sad story. I love how you developed this c...A very sad story. I love how you developed this character and told of her losses. Very well done. lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-61447244685348150572013-04-17T13:06:29.509-04:002013-04-17T13:06:29.509-04:00This was very good. I try to read further every ti...This was very good. I try to read further every time you post. I follow on my reader.katie eggemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00615362861509258088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-57030611119288253182013-04-16T22:04:59.050-04:002013-04-16T22:04:59.050-04:00I adore the following of bloodlines and the innate...I adore the following of bloodlines and the innate recognition of an elder, unknown ancestor. Great job Renee!angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-85781071230729838032013-04-16T16:38:13.447-04:002013-04-16T16:38:13.447-04:00I just read your Master Class story and thought th...I just read your Master Class story and thought that was good. This is even better. Mysterious and sad and well-deserving of that *ahem* novel.stephhttp://peopledothingswiththeirlives.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-61434210374431584972013-04-16T16:17:51.764-04:002013-04-16T16:17:51.764-04:00This is definitely my favorite of your stories tha...This is definitely my favorite of your stories that I've read so far, and intriguing enough that I want to go back and read the other bits. I think there was like one word missing somewhere up there, but exceptional writing. Mayhap you should ditch the *ahem* when you say novel...??shannonhttp://www.thesqueakywheelblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-6372166093214034942013-04-16T13:23:16.215-04:002013-04-16T13:23:16.215-04:00Very sad indeed,,Very sad indeed,,PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-6112357516284855992013-04-16T12:49:42.627-04:002013-04-16T12:49:42.627-04:00This is terribly sad. ): I hope there's a day ...This is terribly sad. ): I hope there's a day soon when they can recognize each other!Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-82605161821716235612013-04-16T11:57:27.835-04:002013-04-16T11:57:27.835-04:00Dark curls and perfect, infectious smiles. Genera...Dark curls and perfect, infectious smiles. Generations of bloodlines, and this passage:<br /><br />"This one, this tiny dancer that so resembled the child she never held. This one, that stopped spinning to look across the space between them."<br /><br />Good stuff Renee! I'd like to read more too!Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-13208850362837825402013-04-16T09:54:44.678-04:002013-04-16T09:54:44.678-04:00This is haunting. I like these two characters toge...This is haunting. I like these two characters together like this.Tracie Nallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07908908021649000930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-86428205934041187342013-04-16T08:08:16.843-04:002013-04-16T08:08:16.843-04:00Spooky and beautifully written. I'm also glad ...Spooky and beautifully written. I'm also glad that someone else wrote prose. Everyone else is writing poetry and we began to wonder if we did it wrong!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09902974888187239547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760035641523636365.post-71094851532110276702013-04-16T01:55:49.517-04:002013-04-16T01:55:49.517-04:00I was intrigued by how show followed the bloodline...I was intrigued by how show followed the bloodline for centuries. I want to know more about who Anne Marie is. Nice story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com